The cool zone

The cool zone might be haunted. There is graffiti on the walls. The roller coaster is broken down. It looked abandoned. My character is scared of ponys, ladybugs and zombies. There were dark thunder clouds, caved in roofs and there were creepy dark holes. Owls tooting the wind whistling. The problem is that I'm stuck under the roofs and I can't get out of them. It smells dead and rotten. It feels like rotten moss. This is weirder then the place I came from. I feel scared. I got lost so wondered round then I got to the cool zone. I heard a voice I shouted "help help!"the man told me his name then he came to help but he just got stuck. We were strong enough to push the roof off us. We were saved .when we went home I told my mum the whole story she couldn't believe her ears,she never let me wonder of again. Then I thanked the guy who saved me